long day

song I wrote and keep revisiting...please feel free to help with a melody (be the Hugh Grant to my Drew Barrymore...)

Long day, lover, long day
reaching out again with hands so used they're bruised and aching
tired feet lover, tired heart
without shame i fold
the stories my day into your arms
(knowing you will keep me)

will you stay till I am sleeping,
as i fall into this weariness, the blanket of tonight
will you stay till I am sleeping.
hold me, enfold me.
stay tonight.